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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Poems Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:05 pm | |
| I have to much free time So I write Voices in your headHear the whispers in your head Upon their sacred ground you tread Seeing the fear in your eyes, I proclaim The waste of your blood is a shame For better should it have been mine At least I would have better used the time You worry to much my dear friend The things that I took have only been lent Do not scream so bitterly loud Else they might find out The secret you have been keeping Would surely have them weeping Don’t worry I’ll never tell At least, if you lend me your mortal shell Then you can be one of us, a spirit in your tongue I see you doubt me; my tricks will prove you wrong Look, to the left, that man over there See him twitch in fright and Glare Would you not like to really know What in his mind does vex him so Reach his mind and find his thought Know that your attempt to stop me has been for naught While your attention has whisked away your presence I stole your living flesh with my essence Your foolishness has cost you all Mark my warning, never heed the voices call loseI was lost on her lips Whose scarlet shine I adore In her eyes I drowned Those pools of deepest joy But then the image was gone Leaving me in despair Weeping for what I had lost Like a fleeting dream she was Darting in and out my life Never would I lose as much As what I had lost today I keep losing everything I cherish My heart, my soul, my love And soon I’l lose her memory to
EmotionsDo we live truly? Or is it merely Illusion, a bleak joke The whispers tell me we are unreal We are but dreams to the sleeper Whose thoughts we can’t fathom Our emotions must be real, I know For what drives us otherwise The touch of joy, The bliss of love The lust for power, the factor of greed All are more real then us We can only truly live if we see them all Therefore we live and enjoy The fruits of these emotions Life is not the question, life is the answer To war!Blade meets blade, axe meets shield For honour and Glory we battle The thundering of hoofs on frost Lightning streaks across the sky Our battle cry freezes their blood Under the banner of death we gather The spirit of battle longs to be free Let it be done, break the seal We go to war and bring conquest Only the ashes of our enemies remain Let the rivers run red with blood Today we will perish on the field We ride to meet our destiny Our death was foretold, Glory to us! introThe poems of the heart are not to sully with Never read them unless so asked For they hold the writers emotions and thoughts Compressed into words and syllables Should you however choose t not heed me If the writer finds out, you will lower his trust Not knowing if you did read that sentence or thought Keeping him or her in paranoia There might be secrets chained in the writings Never meant to see the light of day Or eldritch magicks not meant for others And maybe even gouts of insanity Spilled from his twisted thoughts Remember my plight and statement Leave of the words, or face the infernal text within Which would shatter your soul Comments: I have an intro, how cool is that? Love’s delusionI need a name for the pain that drives me insane To see the white wine spill on her blood red lips A graceful movement through her hair Making my blood pump at a faster pace Her skin is fair as marble, almost like the pristine moon Eyes like jade which melt my heart But it saddens my soul to know she is not real The virulent poison that is my mind created this torment Forever haunting me in my memories and thoughts In my dreams she is there, dancing an endless dance This dream I live is the stuff of nightmares She is a myth I have to believe in She is my unattainable, my glass rose If only she was real, then my dreams would grow better But why would such perfection then fall in love with me? This is my eternal torment, knowing that I will be forever without her And if by luck or chance she does exist In this world or the next I will find her But it shall never be, The gods mock me, and so do I My life is agony without her An empty void between the living Damned to eternal fantasy Of what might and might not be Commentaar: Meh kinda good, was fun to write one of the better (lies!) Problems of mineI am a fool a desperate lunatic Dreaming of a princess never to come Forever shall my thoughts be crimson stained My insanity is the first barrier to cross Twisted and turning before your minds eye Then comes the morbidly sick and heretical The drinking of blood is a matter most pleasing Longing for the lady mine who drinks my blood so gently fine My interest in the arcane has left me deranged Never shall my lips touch hers Read my words and heed my warning well Living a dark life is the way to love-less hell Wanting to dance forevermore with her Under the white moon of my dreams Delicate and rare as a black rose Is the lady who would dance with me Bringing me hope of the sweetest purity Before leaving me in crushing despair Truly my only friends are the insanity And the voices that haunt me evermore Buried I books and nowhere to go Despised by the world, only liked by a few Should I change my precious course to suit the world Or enjoy my tainted self and discard this notion Comments: Ok that's how i think it is, Doom thinking Ftw! King of nothingI salute you king of the damned Your empire in ruins And your subjects lost Can you not see the thunder Or the blood raining down You are to busy in your head Where dark dreams enrol for you Dead is your mind To long have you been here The chains in your throne rusted from the murky waters Your empty eyes see horrors And your maggot stained heart is dark Royal regalia lost in the ages With your never-ending grin I swore to slaughter those that threatened you And their heads decorate your throne Invisible in a pyramid of skulls Where is your wisdom The stainless steel I wield Has never been broken And still you sit there Complacent on your black throne To feed of lost souls My servitude ends here Leaving you to your end Comments: This was entertaining to write, kind felt like writing about something else then broken hearts and lost hope, kinda good no? | |
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:07 pm | |
| Angelic dreamsMy angel dressed in purest black Her wings darkened the stars For in this black pit of despair, I wait for her return She who’s eyes melt my soul Lost in thought with a bleakend stare Her memory petrifies me Never had such beauty graced me with her presence Forever longing to see her again My mind should shatter, if I ever I would lose This precious gift of love, forever entwined with my heart And thus the darkness clouds my soul Forever sorrow in my thoughts The beating of my heart for everything she spoke I wished forever darkness under her wings Now she has left me, losing my dark dreams of glory The light is now dimming, the candles put out Strangling me to oblivion and pain After devotion comes the wreck of apathy Save me from the thoughtless voices Let me find safety in your heart Comments: mental note: Love is cruel, I keep writing these things and I Fon't know why Devoured by despairHere the hearts entwined Here they stood for eternity Lost was my soul to the lady in black The price was known, the bargain paid For love eternal shall we live As the flames engulfed me and the shadow loomed My thoughts of her kept me alive To kneel was to suffer and die She bowed her head and succumbed Eternal torture now awaits The brazen gates have opened to let them in We stand ready, the last points of sanity Blade engulfed in blood of me Death is only for the worthy An abyss of lost hope opens before me Falling through my despair, I heard her voice With gaping mouths and razor teeth We were devoured, and rose again Minds of steel, hearts of fire and soul of brimstone Putting love to the torch The beacons of sadness came and we kneeled Now we wait until the flame of love is rekindled My heart encased in the ice of despair, will only melt for she who steals it Until that day the shadows have me Comments: You probably already figured out my main subject right? another bad one, needs more cohesion! The army of the fallenFrom the darkness we have come Shambling for our glory Nevermore shall we be seen As when we made our dying scream From beyond the gates of Tartarus And the Spawning pits of hell Shadows of our former selves We swore to you allegiance We return to honour our pact Glory to the fallen Crumbling shields and ancient swords have served our purpose well Where once flesh was is now our bones Marching from our darkened tombs Their seals have now been broken Rising from the ashes, as spirits if we must Our forms shall serve where once we stood in life None shall take this pass and none shall take the keep Spread the word of the army of the fallen Comments: yeah err a horde of undead is always fun, another less good one A bad midnight walkRun through the woods Your soft flesh exposed to the moon Howls of terror follow your desperation A bad midnight walk A monstrous form advances His gaping jaws clap at your feet Stumbling over a log A bad midnight walk The lake is in view The stars shine bright on its surface Never would you have guessed the horror A bad midnight walk Almost freedom The caves in sight Blood from many wounds A bad midnight walk Trying to fend them off Losing your strength Red eyes glowing eerily at the prey A bad midnight walk The last strength fades The claws rend flesh The teeth bite your neck A good midnight hunt Comments: There had to be a werewolf in here somewhere, This was to test a style of writing, I think it sucks and I'll never write like this again, I promise heartlesThe feelings were bound In that jaded garden Lost where their souls Forever entwined The flowers sickly sweet Giving his heart The holy ones came and offered succour To the man with the lost heart Forever entwined In his mind he saw her Eyes of amethyst and raven-black hair Legs that begged apologies for lengths that mesmerized With her blood red lips she drew me closer With a delicate grasp and an evil eye My heart in her hands Plunging to the ground She fed it to the wolves Forever is desire to be set free Comments: bah garbage, garbage garbage! this could be Much better! Dying wishDead bodies everywhere Grim roses that I care Following the fateful path Trying not to tempt his wrath You want me to be a good son Why do you make me feel like no one Insults fall like rain on my face I lose my temper and fall in disgrace My life is now terror and abomination My sanity is my lasts souls ration A void where my soul would reside And darkness where my heart should abide Hearing the call of the bloodless ones deep in my dreams They are filled with harmony and inhuman screams Blind and forgotten, I have walked this land Wishing for mercy, that none would grant All the petals fallen, left is the core Ripped and abused, thrown out the door Silently it waits till it will bloom again Waiting for ever, exceeded by ten I wish I could tell anyone, the reason I cry But nobody likes me, I wish I could die The nightmares will haunt me, forgotten I speak You saw behind my mask of sanity, now regret your little peek Mark where I stood, screaming at the sky Hoping the better, but wanting to Die Comments: Rhyming is fun but if you do it to much your poem gets in trouble Blood and gloryComing down from northern lands Frosted armour crimson hands Masters of the brazen gates Behind our nemesis waits We have come for the glory For glory and for blood Let the snow be crimson red The valley covered by the dead Whose souls fly up like sombre wraiths Where eternal battle for them waits For glory and for blood My glory and your blood Sword meets sword, axe meets shield Only to the brave do the gods yield When the battle is over and our bodies stained red Then we mourn the fallen and honour the dead For blood and for glory Your blood and my glory Comments: You need to imagine this like a song, Think Finntrol or hammerfall insanityEnter the chamber, down goes the dagger Blood on the floor, screaming in chorus I’m not in this to be your slave The screaming stops, the eye closes Chanting his unholy name, spasming the soul I just feel like this today The inscriptions stained with blood, an eye for an eye Ancient bottled wine, chains locked to the table But I never really cared Torches thrown, corpse’s burn Eyeless eyes look back at me, you are next So we go along with the knife Eldritch visions, sanity lost Cold steel in your guts, mocking laughter And we hope for the better Asking nothing, giving death The scythes flash, the vigorous stabbing Have you ever felt so good? Letters in the flesh, horror in the mind We can see it clear, the eternal agony My lady of the heart We practice heresy, the putrid husk Torturing the weak, poisoning the strong Will you come with me Gateway of the fallen, nightmare forms Echoing the damned, lost forever To my sacrifice? Heart shakes, blood on my throat Death to the infidel, a king in my mind And she agreed Comments: I'm testing Poem Forms, Failed...Badly needs more cohesion and half of it doesn't make sense The horsemenFrom behind tartarian gates And the fiery pits of hell Charging forth to end this world Which has lingered for to long There is no army that can stop us Conquering this tainted world The first is war Dressed in blood red armour and skulls from his belt His fiery steed is a demon of blood Then in the wake of war comes famine Whose hands reduce the feedstock And rides on spirits of hunger Famine leads pestilence by the hand Whose gaunt and skeletal form festers foul Rotten and sickened to the core The last is death Whose scythe flashes to claim them all his funerary wrappings forever dark Worrying not what they cause The dread lords of the end times Whose image strike fear in all These are the last days mortal Use them well, before your soul is judged Comments: A regular one, not bad but not good either | |
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:08 pm | |
| Summoning the elder Dim the lights Turn the days into nights Killing of your solar pleasures, we bring you now our will Which is to burn and conquer and possibly to kill Whenever your foolish race is ready for its death We will send a messenger, whose body is stained red Never will your mortal race, fathom our dark goals To steal away your shining otherworldly souls Your pagan rites have summoned us into this world Leading you of your righteous ways, who have now curled Nevermore shall we be tainted by your gods of light Whose forms we have robbed of their divine sight For deep in the twisting forests they are kept Much to the dismay of mortals, who thousand tears have wept From our vaults we have been drawn In their icy depths for centuries we yawn Smitten with delight, we mourn your forms For in our eyes you are merely more then worms This place and its unholy geometry IT helped melt the chains and set us free Now your time is up, you can nevermore feel Stop your struggle and let our essences congeal
Commentaar: summoning rites were missing...I fixed that, another regular one, yay improvement!
Lord shadowrender Lord Shadowrender, heed our simple prayers You who has brought thousand worlds to darkness Bringer of darkness, Master of ghouls He who lives on sanity’s edge, in a pristine black tower Your eyes grow bright with witchfire, thinking of the slaughter Baron of undeath, keeper of the shards Wrapped in shadowy trappings so light can never touch you The scythe, soul-eater at your side, drenched in blood of thousands You are the dark fear of death in the minds of younger races Who shake at your presence and fall to your feet Loved by the children of the night, who offer you their souls Descending onto your foes stalwart and implacable Resembling the inevitability of death Wielding ancient eldritch magic’s, whose powers drain life Your powers only matched by the coldness of your heart For in it are only three beads of friendship and one spot of love The three beads of friendship go to his fellow masters Solifuge, the spider-king, the schemer, whose web of power never falls Electro, lightning lord and bringer of the storm, whose shock shall burn the righteous Blighcaller, Lord of the machine and death by fire, his searing touch ashes the land
His love goes solely and forevermore To the dark lady which he swore his unlife to A black rose is the symbol, the power and the key For should it be destroyed, the world would be set free Free of the master of death and madness, who rules their dark dreams But the rose is unreachable and untakeable Kept near the heart of his great love, who remains eternally undeceitfull
Comments: just because I could :wink:
The jester With cheerful grin and playful ways The jester spends his sun-filled days But behind this mask of cheerfulness Lie thoughts that are a mess His laughter is a hollow lie For in the night the jesters cry Weeping for his wasted life In madness he would gladly dive To find release from false joy And not be an expensive toy Only kept for entertainment of little brats Oh, how he hates those foul rats His dreams trapped behind his bright red nose Letting people mock him, it is gross How deep he did sink for these idiots Who never saw their heart that deeply rots Sad to, is his brother the mime Who can say nothing, all the time But never can they voice this thought For fear of having to be laughed A sad man this jester is Who has not a second of bliss Forever salty taste his tears In the ring full of cheers Doomed to stay in the circus for ever and all Until his final curtain falls
Comments: behind the laughter, I was thinking hey instead of writing down my depressed thoughts how about those of someone else? and who better to describe then things that depress me, clowns!
beauty Every time I see your face in my dreams I live in sweetest euphoria Knowing that my blackened heart Belongs to you, my angel of the dark And every time you grace me with your presence I’m filled with ageless joy Lady, you must be Devils work For no one could look this beautiful Your smile puts angels to shame And with a touch you stole my soul Taking it and eating of its essence Nimmermore shall I be whole Unless I could snatch from you, a kiss And with that I would show you My devotion to you You would never see a trace of doubt In my eyes swim only dreams Of you and me together Since you’re such a beauty Can I be your beast?
Comments: Remember what I said about not writing stuff like this again?, I lied !
Tic tac toe Diggety, Daggety, Do What was once was living needs to go Devouring of flesh on its way The screams echoing from that fateful day When the dead men walked the land With life and terror hand in hand Trigger, Tragger, Trock I want your head on the executioners block For the crime you did unto me You enjoyed and did with glee Therefore it is your fate forevermore To be eternally stopped to heavens door Bagel, Bogel, Bell Welcome to the gates of hell I see your name is on the list Yes you truly are devil-wished Lucifer wants you in his hall Would you dare oppose his call Rigged, Ragged, Roll Lost now is your soul Serving with power and grace Deep in satans fireplace Where Evil does lash And all is burned to ash
Comments: a childunfriendly rhyme, a not to stupid one, but not good either
Solifuge Solifuge, Spider-lord, schemer Many think you but a little arachnid But they find the spider has a deadly bite From your web of power, you survey the world Ready to strike at a moment of weakness In the secret tunnels of the human mind You hold dominion, with a fist of fear Your thousand eyes watch the terror with glee Feeding on the frightened cries Never the same you have their minds Darting in and out of time You lead them on a merry dance But in the end you pull their strings Dance, puppets, dance for the masters enjoyment Weaving webs of lies and deceit Where nothing is what it seems You walk in and out, taking what you want Before the illusion fades you are long gone Master of scuttlers and assasins Lord of deceit and illusion Grant me the power to deceive and betray And Your offerings shall be great
Comments: one I made for a friend
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:09 pm | |
| Lost hopeWhether I live or whether I die The only thing I wish is your smile On the roots of my heart is only one name One thought that drives me insane Do you love me or is it illusion Maybe I should tell, I love you But it won’t matter much I’d sell my soul to Hell But then I could never love again If you were a mermaid I’d be the sailor that drowned before he could reach you If you were an angel I’d be a soul sent to hell But you are a girl, luckily And you have my heart in shackles Would I ever dare ask I would be turned down, I’m sure I only wish, one day I hear that joyfull word That sends my heart to heaven Comments: I lie and deny, But I like writing like this BlightcallerBlightcaller, man-machine of fire With your touch you scar the land Death by fire in your land of flame No one can escape your fiery wrath In your bionic head gears move Making plans of destruction In the blackened pits of hell you rule With mechanical fists of fury Steel is your body, Fire in your blood Sorcerous power in your veins, Abyss in your eyes Destruction of all the unclean is your goal And in every fire you live You the final judge, he who shall bathe the world in fire With the ever flickering flame of hate There is nothing in your wake but ash You are the malice and the burning of humans The scalding of flesh is pleasing to your sight Indeed many worship you in your aspect as destroyer Searing their flesh with your mark You have long since judged the world Deciding it was unworthy Oh lord of fire and machine Hear my prayers, judge my enemies unworthy And purify them by the flame Consume their forms to power your machine And claim me, as your servant Comments: another for a mate flutterFlutter, Flutter, Little fall Landing on the safest wall Your pretty wings have been denied Though I pleaded on what was right I never felt the slightest touch Yet I wanted it so much For in your tiny angel state Imprisoned here, so I wait Untill you do the demons crime Sealing you away from time Then I can be whole again Not to be stopped by thousand men Only on the safest wall Will you hear the masters call Comments: Something that got stucck in my head, so i wrote it down, sucks but meh who cares Wicker danceRotting away inside my closet Is the soul of the denied With binding wrists of darkness And the sea of brazen hate My heart is bound and locked inside The thing they stole from me With arrogant blades of evil And the carrion of disease We wait till we must rise again And bring you to your knees Limping on the castle walls With bravado of your lies Falling darkness entombs me With harsh inhuman cries The crescendos of demon falls Resound the castle bells The last vestige of sanity On a death it is to fall Where nevermore I have seen The wings for who I died Ashen faced servitors, heroes of the past Their bloodless lips touch now the sky Their names will never last Comments: I had an urge to use very difficult words Lunar romanceThe lady moonwhisper, whose eyes are like light Her bleak stare touches my heart She is the one I long to be united with Cradling me in her arms I fall asleep To wake into the night of entropy Where her face is obscured by darkness For years I will wait and cry Then at the last moment of agony I will fall And be caught in her hidden face By her unearthly grace and love I will be her lycanthrope forever Always changing and forever the same, for her So does the wicked rose grow on unholy soil Remembering the lunar romance Comments: a nice one, but I'm missing something, ofcourse I always do...like my sanity His heritage calls his name The dark inside him fights to free sense to kill overwhelming Resist the hate, save the child A break in loyalty, a leap of fate Angelic dreams for a fiend redeemed Despised by all, trusted by few Save the world, no matter the cost From Vexing thoughts he got his name In Shining glory he found his fame Between Mortals he dwells Will he rise or will he fall No one knows, time will tell warYou look as sorry as the last one did It seems you wont even fight me Fleeing from your fears you ran Me and my friends have been tracking you And when were finished its going to be bad You never even stood a chance Don’t try to beg, It wont help You fooled yourself, You were not better Drop that gun and step to me Here it ends for you, in an alley With no one to help you out Where are your false friends now This ends here on the edge of a knife With your blood on the ground and your blood on my shirt Comments: HEy something else then high fantasy | |
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:09 pm | |
| duel Today is the reckoning of souls Here you are to be judged Will you be sent to gehenna or to heaven We shall see, My blade is ready In this searing inferno of pain We shall do battle to the death Steel on steel, let the righteous win Avenging the fallen and saving us all I lay pierced on your blade This blood is mine, I think It should have gone differently The last silver threads of life Ebbing from the last cut Nowhere left to go
Comments: Nothing to say here, neither good nor bad
End times These are the end times When the skies are crimson stained And the oceans sink to hell When all debts will be called in Thrice-damned we are Cast into the river of lead In whom the souls float of heretics Into the abyss and beyond the tartarian gates The demon hounds bay for our world Soon their chains will break We will be nothing but food for the gods Their immense hunger only satiated by oblivion Tumbling before their infernal eyes Nothing will last, Nothing survives
Comments: ah good old depression, apocalypic thoughts rule
Rivers First there is the mountain The mountain passes into the forest The forest harbours a river The river descends into the sea When we are born we grow into a strong mountain The mountain nourishes the forest As we do our children, Our progeny We nourish them with our knowledge Which flows like a river This river of knowledge goes to the sea So is our knowledge absorbed by the whole And as our knowledge reaches the sea, so do we Lost in the collective, there ends our life
Comments: LIfe is a river...or something like that
Outside We live here, the ones you abhor These are our homes, our lives Under the light of stars we seek We wander your sacred places Your disdain is noticeable We seek the silence of this place The solitude it offers is bliss For in your cities it is poison The dead do not complain They share our bleak thoughts even If only you could see our side The darkness is not to fear It is merely an escape, not to be seen No, you cannot see, you are lost Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Comments: Was to depressed to write at the time
dreams I wish she was here The lady I long for In the worlds that my fantasy spring Glimmering in each and every My mind is hard to fathom Still she is there haunting me Through my head she goes Dancing an endless dance She is my delight my one escape From the torment that is living In my mind, I am the hero The one that saves, all untrue For who saves me more then she does So help me out, save my heart
Comments: same
Forget it all I’m slipping away, Into the void Losing it all into the fall Why did it leave, the emotion Gasping for breath, I’m pulled under This ocean of despair is smothering me Somebody save me from myself Plunging into the darkness, I go on Its all gone, Into the great white Still some pieces linger on Twisting in me like shards of broken glass Driving me to precious insanity I will not be broken by this I must stand strong or all is lost Never again shall the sadness have me
Comments: Same here to
Seeded terror Theres something inside of me Behind this mask of sanity This pathetic creauture has to hide For the thing that lives inside Eating at my body and tearing at my soul Destruction is its only goal The seeded terror now arise Living on behind human lies Asking nothing, giving hell It lives inside a mortal shell We will play hide and seek Like lambs to the slaughter, weak Pay now our infernal price And we shall hear your cries
Comments: Was still to depressed[/b] | |
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:10 pm | |
| duel Today is the reckoning of souls Here you are to be judged Will you be sent to gehenna or to heaven We shall see, My blade is ready In this searing inferno of pain We shall do battle to the death Steel on steel, let the righteous win Avenging the fallen and saving us all I lay pierced on your blade This blood is mine, I think It should have gone differently The last silver threads of life Ebbing from the last cut Nowhere left to go
Comments: Nothing to say here, neither good nor bad
End times These are the end times When the skies are crimson stained And the oceans sink to hell When all debts will be called in Thrice-damned we are Cast into the river of lead In whom the souls float of heretics Into the abyss and beyond the tartarian gates The demon hounds bay for our world Soon their chains will break We will be nothing but food for the gods Their immense hunger only satiated by oblivion Tumbling before their infernal eyes Nothing will last, Nothing survives
Comments: ah good old depression, apocalypic thoughts rule
Rivers First there is the mountain The mountain passes into the forest The forest harbours a river The river descends into the sea When we are born we grow into a strong mountain The mountain nourishes the forest As we do our children, Our progeny We nourish them with our knowledge Which flows like a river This river of knowledge goes to the sea So is our knowledge absorbed by the whole And as our knowledge reaches the sea, so do we Lost in the collective, there ends our life
Comments: LIfe is a river...or something like that
Outside We live here, the ones you abhor These are our homes, our lives Under the light of stars we seek We wander your sacred places Your disdain is noticeable We seek the silence of this place The solitude it offers is bliss For in your cities it is poison The dead do not complain They share our bleak thoughts even If only you could see our side The darkness is not to fear It is merely an escape, not to be seen No, you cannot see, you are lost Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Comments: Was to depressed to write at the time
dreams I wish she was here The lady I long for In the worlds that my fantasy spring Glimmering in each and every My mind is hard to fathom Still she is there haunting me Through my head she goes Dancing an endless dance She is my delight my one escape From the torment that is living In my mind, I am the hero The one that saves, all untrue For who saves me more then she does So help me out, save my heart
Comments: same
Forget it all I’m slipping away, Into the void Losing it all into the fall Why did it leave, the emotion Gasping for breath, I’m pulled under This ocean of despair is smothering me Somebody save me from myself Plunging into the darkness, I go on Its all gone, Into the great white Still some pieces linger on Twisting in me like shards of broken glass Driving me to precious insanity I will not be broken by this I must stand strong or all is lost Never again shall the sadness have me
Comments: Same here to
Seeded terror Theres something inside of me Behind this mask of sanity This pathetic creauture has to hide For the thing that lives inside Eating at my body and tearing at my soul Destruction is its only goal The seeded terror now arise Living on behind human lies Asking nothing, giving hell It lives inside a mortal shell We will play hide and seek Like lambs to the slaughter, weak Pay now our infernal price And we shall hear your cries
Comments: Was still to depressed[/b] | |
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:10 pm | |
| Will there be an end? The torment I endure crushes me Does she, or does she not Uncertainty is the problem Relieve me from the agony Answer the enigma, solve the puzzle Tell me if I should keep dreaming Or try and forget the emotion Each second I wait is a year Minutes become aeons of cold For her, there is nothing I wouldn’t do Tears almost burn on my cheeks I hope she does, illusion is near Please answer my question truthfully That I might be certain of it
Comments: waiting waiting and in the meantime I wrote stuff
lakedancer Come, come with me Be my eternal dream Dance on the lake Come dance with me Under the great bough tree Please be my dream Forever and ever and on Ever and ever and on Under the light of stars Dancing with my lady On the lake we go on Ever and ever and on No, don’t leave me Don’t let me go I wish to stay Between the great trees Forevermore, forevermore, forevermore
Comments: I got the idea when hearing "finntrol - rok" and well I had to write something
electro Electro, Lord of lightning Stormlord from beyond Master of thunderwaves On your clouds of pure electricity Vengeful as ever, your enemies long since charred Ravaging the land with wind and ligtning Cold as the northern lands of old Sweeping all before you into the clouds None can match your fury in battle With great hammers you crush your foes And in calmness the music of your flute echoes on There is nowhere you cannot reach For where there is air and electricity There is your dominion till the end When the time comes when the world Which has existed long enough, must be purged And together with the other end lords Will you ride out bringing lightning and reaping their souls While others fear the storm and lightning I stood out and declared my allegiance You struck me with your might Now I long for such power again Oh storm lord grant me your blessing And I will be forever yours
Comments: grammar nazi's aside I did a request, it took ages
loss Now I dream, sleeping on clouds of the purest oblivion Pondering what I had done wrong For why else where you gone? My head spins with questions, spiralling downward At least your free, free from me I hope you find you find happiness, I really do For none know what the strands of fate will hold We can only pray for salvation in this mess
Comments: can you say melodramatic? but kinda good..i think
The end of the serenade When the trumpets fade and fall to dust The eyes from beyond watch dispassionate Their black tongues click a dark rhythm No mercy for the eternal blasphemer
With heart like a glacier The serenade was brought to halt Before its infernal throne Fallen from disgrace is the enemy
As the piano stopped to play So did the world end For in ravaged tears the angels cried And called for the end of all
The flute that tuned ever on Was broken on the knee of chaos Imperfection spread to heaven And the gates did fall unto the creator
Orchestral tones fled to the depths Stranding in between the wars Then all tumbled down And the end was forged on tones of loss
Comments: another good one...lallalalala eer stuff
bunny I was looking for my bunny Its cage was empty, funny Im certain I locked the door well I tried o ring his dinner bell
No bunny came to lunch Normally he would run to munch I looked around the whole garden I even asked the gate warden
Mommy didn’t know where he was Maybe if I put down a water glass Then I asked my dad who was busy in the shed He said not to go in there; maybe he would come to my bed?
In the morning we looked all over the place But of my bunny, not a trace Dad said don’t worry, if your sweet He said in a funny tone, you’ll get a treat
It was almost my birthday Bunny was lost 2 days, I wait and pray We looked everywhere except the shed He couldn’t be there, dad said But if I was sweet Dad said he would give me a treat
At my birthday I couldn’t really eat I would think of bunny and my heart would bleed But then dad said “look its bunny” I froze and dad thought it funny Bunny was under a silver platter Cut into to 3, such was the splatter
My dad laughed, heres your treat Eat it, you were sweet I cried and I screamed and ran up the stair My dad was a monster, It wasn’t fair
The next day my fathers wasn’t in his bed I told mom not to look in the shed But, I said, if she was sweet She would get a treat…
Comments: MuHahahahaha…No seriously rather good, and common he had it comming
Loss of a life The smoke of her burial caught me unaware I watched in Dismay as she became prey To tongues of black fire and flickering hate Flared up in my veins, Like wrath of the gods
No lightning or Storm could keep me away As I wept on her grave, my tears stained the soil The pain of my loss made all the more clear When you rose from the entombing earth
Like a shroud of despair, in darkness declared I felt the pull of the gates of insanity Your crystal clear eyes, stared into my soul I wished you were back and remembered your cries
Now my soul is stained black, and over the years The pain ebbed away, I felt what I missed With locked intent I took a blade The ending came slowly and slit was my wrist
Now we float up to heaven, my dreams all are true As the sun sets and the world came to rest We disappeared with a smile Nothing but ghosts in the fog
Comments: Difficulty normal, it started well but then I couldn't find the words
Queen of death Mistress of a thousand burning souls As were ripped to pieces Redued to husks of flesh Stolen were our souls
This torment is infernal The darkness presides The queen of the damned With blades of witchfire
Death is release Heaven falls slowly Toppling the prayers And sending them hate
Blackness is turned Monstrous gods denied A flicker gives away The power of darkness
Nowhere to run Nowhere to hide Like a coward Let heaven be denied
Comments: Short and weird, succubi infernal themed
She She is the pain She is disease She makes me do whatever she pleases
She is the darkness She is the Light She feeds my will to continue the fight
She is my dream She is my agony She is my bleakest anomaly
She keeps my chains She is the mistress She keeps me down in the city of Dis She bears the death-mark She bears the shame She is the one that drives me insane
She is the keeper She has the key She is the one that can set me free
Comments: after a year of hiatus I'm finally writing stuff down again....god I'm so lazy | |
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Posts : 139 Join date : 2007-10-07 Age : 31 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Mon Oct 08, 2007 8:40 pm | |
| Wall of Text Crits for... | |
| | | Shadowchaos
Posts : 71 Join date : 2007-10-06 Age : 31 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Mon Oct 08, 2007 8:51 pm | |
| Damn, that are a lot of poems indeed, you have been busy it seems Well, good job, I haven't read all yet, but I'm sure I will when I got some time. | |
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| Subject: Re: Poems Mon Oct 08, 2007 9:04 pm | |
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| | | Shadowchaos
Posts : 71 Join date : 2007-10-06 Age : 31 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Mon Oct 08, 2007 9:05 pm | |
| Nu-uh, I has more health then 9000 *flex* | |
| | | Angel of Death Admin
Posts : 139 Join date : 2007-10-07 Age : 31 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Mon Oct 08, 2007 10:47 pm | |
| I used Spell Reflection lolz^^ | |
| | | Shadowrender Admin
Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:54 pm | |
| noes i got critted by spell reflect *ankh* anyways you won't be done i have about 70 pages of poems left | |
| | | Shadowchaos
Posts : 71 Join date : 2007-10-06 Age : 31 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:55 pm | |
| Holy crap?! That much? Run guys before it's too late! | |
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:05 pm | |
| the wall of text looms ....
Lol aimed shot you die from falling damage... | |
| | | Shadowchaos
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| Subject: Re: Poems Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:06 pm | |
| *slow fall* Oh and was this a topic for poems or just too try owning people with WoW actions? | |
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Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:32 pm | |
| poems | |
| | | Blight215
Posts : 51 Join date : 2007-10-11 Age : 33 Location : In the dark...
| Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 12, 2007 6:28 pm | |
| Sleep Tight
I wanted to tell ya, listen up if you dare, I truly love you and I care. If you'll go to bed and wait for the night, I'll tell ya "sweet dreams and sleep tight".
Darkness and Light
Darkness and Light, Forever they fight. I am the darkness, She is the light. Together we'll never be. Darkness and Light, Forever we'll fight.
Blightcaller
I can't walk in the day, I can't walk in the light, I'm a critter of darkness, I'm the Caller of Blight.
Fallen in Love
Once we were lovers, Once she was there. Then it all happend, Now I'm left alone.
Fallen in Love, I'm dead nor alive. Fallen in Love, And there's nothing i can do.
She who I love, won't break my heart again. Fallen in Love, There's nothing I won't do.
I wonder why and how
If I hurted you, I would tell you "I'm sorry".
If you were wondering why, I would search you the solution.
If you would cry, I'd be there to catch your tears.
And I wonder why and how, This could get this far.
If you were in danger, I would protect you.
If you'd be alone, I'd come for you and only for you.
If you had pain, I would try to cure it.
And I wonder why and how, This could get this far...
Vampire
Only in great danger, You can unleash your truly anger. Then you'll walk from no-ones land, And our army will follow your comand. Thou art the one, who leads us towards, The enemy lines. Thou art the one, who grants us awards, Awards of Power, Awards of Might. We're just children, Children of the Night.
never made a thought
Altough I think, You will never know, Never made a link, Never thought of tomorrow...
Just a Lie...
Roses rose from beneath, Chimaera's afraid to show their teeth, Souls of the dead began to cry, When dragons became afraid to fly.
The nights went unnaturally dark, The extinct fire never gave a spark, The fenix eventually burnt himself, When a dark rock turned into an elf.
Only the brave realy understand, That this place is no-ones land, Unlike the centaurs who began to cry, When they noticed, life is just a lie...
One more day
Screams and pain, Nothing to blaim, There's no way, Can't face another day..
Not Good Enough
I'm sorry (name) I'm sorry that I love you, I'm sorry for the things I do I'm sorry for what I say, I'm sorry for every day, I'm sorry because this is just a lie, I'm sorry because I cry, I'm sorry... But I guess sorry isn't good enough...
I see...
I see the sun, I see the sky, But I cannot find, The reason why.
I see the land, I see the sea, I don't know how , I can tell thee.
I see your smile, I see your eyes, You've captured me, Within these lies.
I see the sun, I see the sky, And I think, I'm Gonna cry ... | |
| | | Blight215
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| Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 12, 2007 6:40 pm | |
| Shattered
I Loved You, I Really Did, But Then All Of A Sudden, My Dream Broke, My Life, My World, My Space, Shattered into Thousands Of Pieces...
Burning...
Once and for all, I beg for your call, Screaming your name, Love and hate, it's the same..
Hoping the better, When writing this letter, You're my hearts desire, You somehow putted my soul on fire..
Burning...
Everything is chaos
In my head, everything chaos, I still cry because of your loss, My dream ended in disaster, Toughts of you, coming faster and faster..
Not knowing what to do, When I'm thinking of you, Please tell me where I went wrong, Cause everyone I loved, they're all gone..
What should I've said? The first time we've met. Is what I then did not right? Is it because of what I write?
Everything is chaos, Because of your loss...
Time to die
I don't know why I am here, I don't know why you're still there, Inside my mind, inside my heart, My life is just too hard..
I want to get out, And scream it all out, Now it's time to die, Cause I believe this is all ...a lie.
A lie...
This is a lie, In which I'll die, Why would I even try, Why do I even cry...
Road of love
The road of Love, Nothing's above, Nothing as powerfull, Nothing so meaningfull.
It has nothing to do, With how I am in front of you, Nothing what I say, There's still something i my way..
Survived
Many have lived, Many have died, Only the brave, Realy survived.
Locked inside
Locked inside, Fighting for some pride, Right now I don't know what to do, I'm standing in front of you...
Have I done something?
Have I done something, That made you sad? Is there something, That made you feel this bad?
Trying and crying
Have to try, not to cry. Have to try, I won't cry..
Eventually everything returns
You'll see, Eventually everything'll get ok again. You'll see, Eventually everything'll get as it was.
Waiting (it's a quote, not a poem)
I'll be waiting for you...
Don't you cry
Please don't cry, For you I'll try, Now please don't cry... | |
| | | Blight215
Posts : 51 Join date : 2007-10-11 Age : 33 Location : In the dark...
| Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 12, 2007 6:46 pm | |
| Lost
I'm Lost in the darkness, I'm longing for you, I'm lost in the darkness, Is this true?
I'm lost in the darkness, What can I do? I'm lost in the darkness, What should I do?
One, under the banner (song)
We are one, Once and for all, We raise the banner, With one nation’s call.
-Raise it now!-
We are one, Once and for all, We raise the banner, With one nations call!
-Rise!-
We are One! -We are right!-
We are One! -One to fight!-
We are One! -One to cry!-
We are One! -One to die!
We’ll stand and fight! -The nation’s right!-
We are one, Once and for all, We raise the banner, With one nation’s call.
-Raise it now!-
We are one, Once and for all, We raise the banner, With one nations call!
-Rise!-
We are One! -We are the banner!-
The war has ended
Our past forgotten, Our life the same. Our bodies left to rotten, Our souls don't feel the pain.
Fck
I feel like shit, And I know it's for what I did, But controlling, I couldn't, If I knew this is what was going to happen, I wouldn't.
Now I have to try, To get over this and not to cry, Can you forgive? ... Will you forgive?
Something about that night
I don't know what happened that night, But it stole away my pride. Isn't there anything I can do, Without hurting others, without hurting you? I'm really sorry for all this, I'm really sorry I accepted that kiss. You're all on your way to leave me behind, Is there another way, a way I can find? All I now feel is shame, And it's me that takes the blame. ...My soul is trying to hide from the pain...
You Should Know...
You Should Know... You're The One, Were For I'm Shy, You're The Reason, I Will Try...
You Should Know, You're The One, I Loved The Most, You're The Reason, I Got Lost... | |
| | | Shadowrender Admin
Posts : 138 Join date : 2007-10-05 Age : 33 Location : Belgium
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Oct 13, 2007 7:41 pm | |
| cool, but you need to make em longer (in my opinion ofcourse) the longer ones are the best | |
| | | Blight215
Posts : 51 Join date : 2007-10-11 Age : 33 Location : In the dark...
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Oct 13, 2007 7:54 pm | |
| yea but sometimes its like: " mm yes thats a good start" and it stays with a start | |
| | | Blight215
Posts : 51 Join date : 2007-10-11 Age : 33 Location : In the dark...
| Subject: Re: Poems Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:45 pm | |
| A new day
When Morning Comes, And Night Will Leave, When Sun Will Rise, And Stars Will Fade, When Birds Start Whistling, And Dogs Will Bark, Then You'll Know, A New Day Has Begun..
We, Together
Love you so much, More than I can Explain..
The feeling that you give me, If you put your arms around my neck, I can't describe..
I want to scream, That you're the one, The only one for me..
You're my girl.. The most extraordinary person ever, Because you love me..
And we're the most beautiful couple, 'Cause I too, love thee..
-xxx Love Ya xxx-
Life and death
“What is beyond the world of death, Is not known. But, what is in the world of life, You can change..”
“Life fades away where death has to come...”
Love me too
You didn't love me, You didn't dare, But I love you, And I care...
Hate me, Hate me, If you want to break me...
I don't know, What to do now...
now, Hate me, Hate me, If you want to break me...
You didn't love me, You didn't dare, But I love you, And I care...
It is true, Now I ask you, Please, love me, Too...
Trough the darkness thou shallt go!
Run trough the darkness! Deny the lies...
Run trough the darkness! Turn around and you'll look into my eyes...
Run trough the darkness! Deny these lies...
Run trough the darkness! Deny your lies...
Run trough the darkness! I'm coming for you!
Run trough the darkness! This is all, but truth!
Run trough the darkness! Trough the darkness...
Death to come
You will see, That in the darkness, My hope, Fades away...
You still have, That one special place, In my heart, But, it fades away...
You will lose, Me, if you try, To hard, Trust fades away...
You will notice, I’m getting worse, Every day and night, Good fades away...
You will find, Me, lying dead, Upon the ground, Life fades away...
You will see, Suicidal thoughts, Going trough my mind, Pain fades away...
Death to come... | |
| | | Blight215
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| Subject: Re: Poems Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:46 pm | |
| Everything fades
When everything, Has turned to dust.
When all, Is covered in ash.
When hope, Fades away.
And trust, Is gone forevermore.
When Time, Is leading us nowhere.
When past, Is fading in our mind.
When present, Means pain for every soul.
And future, Is fading in front your eyes.
When trust, Is gone.
And you’re, Left alone.
When darkness, Comes...
And Light, Has faded...
Then you might notice, Life has left nothing for you...
Then you might notice, Everything fades...
Have I said?
Have I said, that I love you? Have I said, that I care?
'Cause this is what I feel, the feeling never was this real...
Have I said, that I have feelings for you? Have I said, that you're the one?
'Cause this is what I feel, my feeling never was this real...
Have I said, that you're my hearts desire? Have I said, that my heart belongs to you?
'Cause this is what I feel and this feeling never was this real...
Now everything is getting clear, It is love, what I feel, Love, for you and only for you...
What am I supposed to do?
Sun and rain, It's all the same.
For this is the end, Where time and space are bend. ["the truth I will defend"] ["my broken heath cannot be mend"]
You will see, Though you wont believe me.
All seems lost, when needed the most.
Will you forgive? So again, I can start to live..
Is this how I shall remain, Until I know the truth again?
But what if I told you already? Will it make this friendship steady?
What am I supposed to do? | |
| | | Blight215
Posts : 51 Join date : 2007-10-11 Age : 33 Location : In the dark...
| Subject: Re: Poems Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:52 pm | |
| Everytime I die
Everytime I look at you, And you glance back, I die. ["You look trough my eyes, straight in my soul"]
Everytime I ask you things, And you give the answer, I die. ["Your words penetrate my heart"]
Everytime I touch you, And you touch me, I die. ["Your touch, hits my soul from the inside"]
Everytime I laugh or talk, And you do the same, I die. ["Your voice heals me inside"]
Everytime I think of you, And I see you, thinking too, I die. ["You're thinking, and I hope it's about me.."]
The end
Is This The End, The End of Time, Here It All Ends, Hated In Silence, Afraid of Death...
There’s no answer
Tell me, what is on your mind, Is it the answer I cannot find? Tell me, what went wrong, Tell me, why're you gone..
I don't wanna live, Nor I wanna die, This is the moment, Where I will cry..
You say, you see only lies, Cannot find the anwer, Look in your eyes..
You tell me, you will listen, Look in your eyes and say, Your love is what I'm missing..
I don't wanna live, Nor I wanna die, This is the moment, Where I will cry..
Tell me, what is on your mind, Is it the answer I cannot find? Tell me, what went wrong, Tell me, why're you gone..
Helplessness
I feel so helpless, not knowing what to do, I feel so useless, stuck with this feeling, I can't help you...
Feeling lost, can't help thee, This feeling of helplessness, ... is killing me...
Everyday
Everyday, I loved you more. Everyday, I thought to be forevermore..
My life ain't true, Remember nothing of my past. Why have I build this up for you?, You never did anything for me..
Everyday, I loved you more. Everyday, I thought to be forevermore..
One without
From now on, you can call me, One without a mind, One without a brain, One without a smile, In the world of sun and rain.. | |
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